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Your Touch
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Your Touch |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Your Touch You touch and I’m left dangling on a string with heart expanding and I do believe no angling will relieve me of its load for now I’m captured, snared and raptured by sensations manufactured on a countdown to a fracture bursting to explode. Out blast the tingling impacts riding nerves to every synapse telling knees and legs they might collapse upon this flattened floor. I’m drenched in breathless breathing that now blinds my heart perceiving why my lungs and mouth are grieving since there’s oxygen no more ‘cause your aroma sends me reeling with hypnotic smell careening into muscle, flesh and bone at rates which can’t be charted and I would spend forever basking in your breath with everlasting hope you’d never end my gasping only just now started. And from this magic moment transfixed, I will find your image did fix in my mind when Time does insist I have reached my end. I’ll walk Eternity without the stumbling on legs and feet made whole from crumbling ‘cause thoughts of you will brace my tumbling down that breakless bend. Namyh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, wow, wow ... this is breathtakingly captivating, dear Namyh. Masterfully written and totally after my heart.  Going to read it again and also saving it! Peace and joy in the New Year! Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Namyh I have to repeat Margherita's "WOW" you told it all and in such an interesting way.Brought back a lovely memory.Jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Just had to come back to read your fantastic poem once again. M |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree WOW!!! Kat >^..^< |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita – I am so very proud this piece is totally after your heart. Now you’ve got me captivated and I can’t catch my breath either. Wait! I just caught it……and just in time too. Whew! Come on back and read again after saving it. I’ll make sure they keep the lights on. Three ‘wows’ make me a fan of your kingdom. I’m just glad to be a visitor in it. Have a great year M. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Jo – Anytime one poet can resurrect a lovely memory in another poet, you just know it’s gonna be one of those good years arriving just in time, latearrival. So let it be written. So let it be done. Thanks for enjoying. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita – Your return has my ‘tingling impacts riding nerves to every synapse’. Wheeeee! Now I’m kinda glad I left those lights on. Namyh |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Kat - Believe it or not, here’s how it started. I asked a very special someone to just touch my hand to see if I could translate the experience of a single touch into words which would resonate in the reader. Before I knew it, those poetic triplets began invading the writing and I was heading down a path of eternity at the breakneck speed of love. Whoa! I mean Whew! Ok, both. I love writing like that and I’m so very happy it resonated in you Kat. Namyh |
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