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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-03-05 09:40 PM

Come on Baby

Sara was wearing
her green dress last night
and as usual
it was fitting her plenty tight,
her long red hair
still flowing over her shoulders
and her smile
as lovely as ever
if not a little bolder,
if Sara
would treat me better
perhaps me and Sara
would be together
but Sara knows
what her heart desires,
Sara loves to sing
"Come on baby,
light my fire."

JamesLee
05March
2014

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

1 posted 2014-03-05 10:16 PM

Sweet longings. You know, red hair with a green dress is a lovely image.

Maybe a cigarette and a dry martini.

Touch, but don't look

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2014-03-07 12:46 PM

Perfect

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2014-12-20 05:09 PM

Hello, dear James, where on Earth are you? You are very much missed here on the blue pages. Maybe you are on a honeymoon with Sara?

Please come back to tell us.

Love and Merry Christmas!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-12-21 12:42 PM

hi james, what a delicious poem, you are the best for romantic poetry,
yann

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2014-12-21 09:34 PM

Romantic indeed. Sara seems lovely. Enjoyed.

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2014-12-21 09:37 PM

Good one James.
Sounds like she lit your fire.

true love never looks after it's own interests

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

7 posted 2014-12-24 06:31 PM

Saras don't differentiate between those who should light their fire, and those who should not. Liked muchly.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2014-12-24 10:12 PM

Don't forget to stoke those coals after the fire burns down, my friend - the heat lasts a long time that way...

enjoyed,

j.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2015-01-17 06:37 PM

thank you everyone for the wonderful responses..Margarita, Sara's not for me...james

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