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Open Poetry #49

A Mother's Plea

KAM39
Junior Member
Posts 26

0 posted 2014-09-26 10:25 AM

A blank canvas longs for the caressing strokes that give birth to colorful words
With a heart wide open in a silence, creation is loudly heard
Among the clouds are the visions of a beautiful melody
The sound of a single note calling out for its true love’s harmony

The mighty dreamers are destined to build on pillars of their faith
Finding treasures of wisdom scattered through a path of mistakes
And although, Pessimistic waters threaten to sweep hope out to sea
the dreams are shielded by the words of a mother's plea

“Don't give up because I believe in you"

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-09-26 10:44 AM

Eh . . . My mother espoused those words also, Kam, but she didn't back them up, nor did she tell me the truth I so needed to know in those days. Everything about my mother is clouded over with deceit and outright lies. Your poem was lovely, well written with passion.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

KAM39
Junior Member
Posts 26

2 posted 2014-09-26 10:52 AM

Sorry about your mother, Jerry. I hope you can find peace that frees you of those clouds.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2014-09-29 12:20 PM

Very beautiful, dear KAM39! My Mother loved me deeply and always encouraged me too. And her words have sustained me all through life, even after she moved on.

Much enjoyed your write.

Margherita

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