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Open Poetry #49

I'm just lost

AllAnIllusion
New Member

since 2012-08-17

Posts 6

0 posted 2014-09-28 02:20 PM

Phrases are pouring for my mouth, words are dripping from my tongue. Filling up my empty cup with juice I have yet to drink. I say I think I know the answer and I can make things better. Instead I swallow the liquids captured beneath me with no intentions of saving even a sip. Continuing this everlasting cycle.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2014-09-29 12:02 PM

Dear Syd, it looks like you know the worth of your inspiration and something good you have saved here. You are certainly not alone in experiencing the feeling of being lost, there is quite a crowd searching searching ... and while you search, save, write ... it gives you some points of reference no doubt.

Try to separate phrases for a better representation.

Margherita

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