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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2014-08-29 05:56 PM


The thing of it is,
i need to change my mind.
The thing of it is,
i need you to be kind.
The thing of it is,
you own my very soul.
The thing of it is,
You make my world whole.
The thing of it is,
the world has many a mile.
The thing of it is,
i would travel them for your smile.
The thing of it is,
where do i start?
The thing of it is,
come back into my heart.

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2014-08-30 08:38 AM


very pleasant and pure Romanticism!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2014-08-30 12:51 PM


Heart felt and such a sweet sentiment.
Great to read you here Goldenrose.

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2014-08-31 07:13 AM


Different approach, but very effective, dear Phil. Romantic song of the heart.

May it be heard and sung in agreement.

Margherita

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2014-08-31 04:10 PM


Always happy to see one of the original poets return, Phil. "The thing of it is" I miss the way it was.
                           Ida

latearrival
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5 posted 2014-09-01 06:15 AM


Nice to see an read you.You have been missed.And that is the thing of it on this end.
jo perry

whitbypoet1
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6 posted 2014-09-02 12:48 PM


Beautiful love poetry, the kind I often like to write myself, I hope to read more of your work...Keith.


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7 posted 2014-09-02 01:39 PM


The thing of it is... you write our most romantic selves so beautifully.
Goldenrose
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8 posted 2014-09-06 03:25 PM


Thank you to all who took time to reply...perhaps more poetry may be forthcoming...and i can share some thoughts of my life with all of you on these blue pages...then it will be like coming home...

Goldenrose.

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