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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-05-31 09:26 PM


Things Falling Apart

Sometimes through
a fortunous
chain of events
things come together
and you might
find yourself
in a relationship
where another person
cares for you
and is there for you
when and where you need them
to touch your heart,
but then seemingly through
no fault of your own
things go out of control
and you learn that when it
comes to things of the heart
things can fall apart.

JamesLee
30May
2014

    

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2014-05-31 09:33 PM


"been there ... done that ... WAY too many times!" ...

"Life" (and sadly, relationships) has(/have) a way of getting away from all of us ...

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
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2 posted 2014-05-31 09:51 PM


You betcha, James. Love can hurt.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2014-06-01 01:38 AM


so true, and there is no escape, thanks for the fine penning


yann

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2014-06-04 12:38 PM


Thank you secondhanddreampoet, Jerry and 2islander2 for the nice responses...James
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2014-06-05 10:03 PM


You have written a hard truth...sadly.
hope you are keeping on keeping on, James.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2014-06-19 07:33 PM


Thank you Blues Serenade for the nice response...James
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