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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-05-02 06:36 AM





At the sound of his name
her face lights up
Her eyes sparkle
at the thought of him
She flushes when they talk
Never has she
been in love
like this before
He makes her so happy
She is like someone new
It is a beautiful thing to see them
so young and in love
My baby, my girl, my heart
has found
a heart of her own




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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-05-02 07:12 AM


Awww . . . Just beautiful. So happy for her.

~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-05-02 07:30 AM


me too!

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2014-05-02 08:45 AM


simply lovely 'write!' ...
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-05-02 01:28 PM


Thanks Bruce!
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2014-05-02 11:36 PM


Oh this is so heartfelt...such a sweet poem written by a loving mama.

Really nice...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-05-03 09:07 AM


You called it! Can't help but love it when your child is happy. (no matter what age)

Lori

latearrival
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7 posted 2014-05-03 07:33 PM


A beautiful post to your daughter.Enjoyed, jo
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2014-05-04 08:41 AM


Thanks Jo!
It is nice when she is inspiring rather than exasperating! LOL!

Lori

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9 posted 2014-05-06 05:13 PM


How beautifully your heart dances along with hers, dear Lori! Just precious!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2014-05-06 05:14 PM


Thanks Margherita! It is one of the few things we don't fight about.

Lori

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