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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2014-04-26 01:00 PM





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There was that couple kissing
very close to the point
where our paths crossed.
The electromagnetic waves
caused a storm of
breathtaking intensity.
It didn't come from them though.
It occurred between us,
though our eyes had met
just furtively for a split second.
Two hearts that recognize
each other and communicate
without words, across walls,
through the ether,
at enormous distance,
a distance that is filled
with pure matter of love.
A furtive glance had been enough
to start a cosmic tremor.
Invisible waves
labeled with our names
which perform
a unique, joyous dance
on the platform
of our colliding hearts.


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© Copyright 2014 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-04-26 01:36 PM


And Margherita, it can, and does, happen just like you so wonderfully described. When the chemistry is right all it takes is a look, a penetrating look. A niece of mine was walking down a city sidewalk during lunch hour. A man was walking down the sidewalk opposite her. He saw Carolyn and yelled across the street loudly over the street noise, "Stop walking you are my future wife!" She did stop and stared at him. He almost got ran over as he fought traffic to get to her. They were married in less than a year. She bore him children and the man died far too young from cancer.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Margherita
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2 posted 2014-04-26 01:46 PM


Wow, dear Jerry, what an amazing story, with a sad conclusion, but that was no doubt a happy marriage until it lasted and such love will go on forever ... beyond earthly limits. Thank you for sharing this with me. Fantastic! Yes it happens just so. Thank you for your loving comment on my words.
Margherita

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2014-04-26 08:48 PM


Margherita, my answer. understanding your post.

To a Stranger~

I remember you

You were dressed in blue

And I was passing by

You smiled and I nodded

my reply

many months have passed

But I cannot deny

That each time I pass that site

I keep an open eye.

[This message has been edited by latearrival (04-26-2014 10:45 PM).]

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2014-04-27 12:56 PM


It has always puzzled me that some people think that humans with such intensity of feeling
just one day cease to be.

                                Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2014-04-27 08:21 AM


Margherita,
When you talk about love it isn't just an emotion anymore, it becomes a mechanism of the Universe! Keep on writing! the more you do the more your world becomes a reality for us to share.

Bless your heart
Lori

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
6 posted 2014-04-27 02:00 PM


You joyously put into words and poem this wonderful
moment when occurring takes us by surprise, as it can't be explained because itis just is.....magic

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2014-04-27 03:03 PM


Dear Martyjo, thank you so much for your kind comment and for sharing with us your own wonderful poetic rendering of such a "moment of sparks" that can never be ignored, nor forgotten, It is an amazing event, isn't it!?
Love and peace ... and joy in remembering  

Dear Ida, thank you so much for your very perspicacious comment. I so agree with you, it simply can't be that there is nothing after this incredibly complex and rich existence here on Earth. Consciousness is the key ... we may appear to be individuals with many attempts to reach perfection, but still somehow "incomplete" ... but on the soul level we are linked and we become truly One, from One Source, the Divine Source where we simply are part of Eternity. Thank you, sending you a big hug.

Dear Lori, thank you from my heart for your loving comment. Indeed LOVE is Universal and it is what connects us all, but we become more aware of it when we live it as a peak experience between two souls no doubt, when we realize fully that we are glued together, merging to become one. It is spectacular! Love and hugs.

Dear EmmaRose, thank you so much  for your most loving comment. Yes it is magic, as it seems to happen on its own, unexpected, like a lightning in a blue sky. Love and hugs.

Margherita ... have all a wonderful Sunday!  


"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
8 posted 2014-05-02 10:54 AM


Well said; when one soul evles, we all evolve.


ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
9 posted 2014-05-02 08:59 PM


Somewhere in Time!  Loved this.
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2014-05-03 07:47 PM


a pleasure to read...James
2islander2
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by the sea
11 posted 2014-05-04 02:37 AM


hi Margherita, i love some images (colliding is extremely at purpose) and you point out wuth poetry the extremely important word of feelings (invisible), this made a rich reading indeed, full of pleasure and grace,

have a sunny sunday (i can imagine it in Italy)

regards

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
12 posted 2014-05-06 04:58 PM


That's a great concept, dear Charly, thank you for looking in here and for commenting so kindly.

Thank you so much, dear Kathleen, for your kind reply.

Dear James, thank you kindly for your appreciation.

Dear Yann, thank you for your most loving comment and your wishes. Wishing you too a great week.

Love and peace.
Margherita

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