Crown Victoria Dreams (Breathe Deep)

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Open Poetry #49

Crown Victoria Dreams (Breathe Deep)

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-02-28 02:57 PM

Seemed bright enough as
nothing but the stare
of the same old sun
shone off the windshield
of her vintage pink Cadillac
which she skillfully parked
next to his Crown 'Vicky
that up unto that time had
commanded the attention of the
babes that told behind bank counters
of the wavy fair-haired guy in the parking lot
with the '56 Crown 'Vicky
that could open them up faster than the pop-top
of a beer in the hands of an in-port sailor
and whose eyes were constantly
running their nylons and unfastening
their bra hooks while at the same time
laying for the old dame in the vintage Cadillac
who did better than most with Mary Kay
and placed the majority of her profits
on her own face and body which was
exactly what the guy in the parking lot was admiring
at this moment when the door of the pink Cadillac
opened and those slim old legs swung out
with just a tinge of thigh as a freebie to the fellow
in the Crown 'Vicky who decided he'd seen all he could
stand for one day and made his way over to the old dame
and said ".......................".

Touch, but don't look

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-28 03:25 PM

Hey, Wait a minute! That's not fair, man! Jeeze, a cliffhanger. I'm sure your ending is better than mine, I don't know any pick up lines that aren't dumb and cheesy. Darn it Jack! LOL!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-02-28 03:40 PM

. . . and the beat goes on . . .

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

3 posted 2014-03-01 01:01 AM

Lori, do you really want me to tell you? I wrote a sequel to this titled 'Last Ride of a Pink Caddy'.

No, it's not the story of a discolored golfers' boy, but it does follow some of the things used in the game.

Jack

Touch, but don't look

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

4 posted 2014-03-01 01:02 AM

Does it ever Jerry! Thanks for the read.

Touch, but don't look

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