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Her Innuendo
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Her Innuendo |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He took her innuendo hook, line, and sinker She messed with his mind and with his heart did tinker She didn’t lead him on per se She let him follow her sash shay He didn’t complain he was on lover’s lane She was content with his intent Took his heart and all that was in it She didn’t break it but she sure as hell bent it. LGR©2/26/14 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What she didn't know was he had the clap. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Attractions have a scent all their own, and once the aroma fills the nostrils of the buck, he goes where the doe may lead him. Usually a pair of headlights...if you know what I mean. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm sure she loved the applause Jerry! Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I know exactly what you mean Max! Right on! Lori |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
At first I thought that an innuendo was an Italian suppository.. ! … She didn’t lead him on but she didn’t lead him off either huh.. Sounds like he was, hell bent, on feeling needed One of those lessons we all have to go through.. Not that we all learn from it, but nevertheless we all have to go through it.. Loved the last two lines p.s. jerry you're deadpan reply made me laugh out loud.. and Lori your reply back to jerry was even funnier! great stuff |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice writing, Lori. Enjoyed. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Richy, I swear your comments are getting as funny as your poems. I love it! THANK YOU! Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Ida, I enjoy hearing from you! Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
okay so i take it its not a suppository?! 8) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks James! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
No Richy, it is not a suppository. Nor is it bread or cookie dough. Silly! Lori |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Really a good piece here. Makes me think she's the kinda gal that would take me straight to the 'Gallows'! Touch, but don't look |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You got that right big fella! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I could have put it a bit more thoughtful and with more sensitivity. ~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Not to worry, you already have it covered Jerry! quote: Now that's some serious pipe yankin' sensitivity right there I'm here ta tell ya! Touch, but don't look |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh you guys!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gotta love it . . . Heh.Heh ~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~ |
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