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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Shifting sands Bayou turbulence Miles and miles from you Still . . . Like draping moss Pushed by the winds of your thoughts As you lie in bed dreaming Of a man You can't stop wanting And he is there on the bayou Dreaming his very own dreams of you You quickly sit up in bed Understanding he has given you Something to remember Bayou turbulence and draping moss Pushed by the winds of your thoughts ©June 3, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Okay, this so works for my tumbling midnight turbulences of upright moments.... |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
A new favorite! I much enjoyed the read--this had a subtle impact upon my psyche. You have accomplished in this what I strive to accomplish in my own expressions--to move a reader without pushing.  I am left with poet-envy.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I thank you very much Karilea, your comments always give good feelings. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wow! You thoughts this morning have left me smiling and grateful to begin this new day Lady Goodman. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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