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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-05-10 07:22 PM



Guns with No Bullets

Jaded days
and unfulfilled nights
the joys of life
passing me in the fast lane,
the pleasures of life
filled with too much hurt and pain.
I need some embraceable interaction
I yearn for feelings of satisfaction,
not the feelings I am receiving:
like feelings of eating a steak dinner
with only vegetables on the plate,
feelings like riding a surfboard
on an ocean without any waves,
feelings like guns
with no bullets...

JamesLee
10May
2013


  

  

    

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-05-10 07:36 PM


Yep. Been there. Hang in, James, it will get better.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2013-05-11 01:38 AM


splendid images, james, enjoyed a lot,


yann

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2013-05-13 06:10 PM


I feel for you...  An ocean, especially in Hawaii, without waves is really really bad!  Enjoyed!  
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2013-05-19 08:28 PM


I think there comes a time when we need to look at new ways to fill our lives.
Change can be a good thing.
                           Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2013-05-23 02:26 AM


Thank you Jerry, 2islander2, LighthouseBob and Marchmadness...Ira change is always happening we just have to decide if we'll participate...James
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
6 posted 2013-05-30 03:15 AM


awesome .... completely relating to this one.....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
7 posted 2013-06-29 06:24 AM


had to read this again and i am glad I did,,,,loved it especially this part

"jaded days
and unfulfilled nights
the joys of life
passing me in the fast lane,
the pleasures of life
filled with too much hurt and pain.
I need some embraceable interaction ...." awesome!



~~~kingsangel~~~

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