Midnight Inks (Repost A tribute to the women writers)

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Open Poetry #48

Midnight Inks (Repost A tribute to the women writers)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-09-17 09:44 AM

~I wrote this in honor of the women that share their pain on paper so well they are often hard for me to read~
Ladies
With their midnight inks
Urn their emotions
In sacred places
Set like traps
On paper
Their baited lines
Fish me in
To their pathos
Picking my lock
Memories
Repressed release
Too pointed
Too poignant
Too, too intuitive
Tentatively
I taste
Their manna

LGR(C)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-17 09:58 AM

Nicely conceived and worded, Lori, your talent is amazing.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-09-17 10:22 AM

Oh yes...I feel this poem...such a tribute by a talented poet is wonderful...you hit the nail on the head...well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-09-17 10:27 AM

Thanks Jerry! means alot coming from you.

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Startime! Thank you! thank you! Big Hug back at you.

Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-09-17 11:34 AM

Nice, very expressive write.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2012-09-17 01:21 PM

Thanks JL, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.

Lori

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