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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2012-09-08 09:38 PM




Her soul as colored smoke lost in soft forever wind,

a child of the stars returns to wait beginning time again

ceding broken hearted hunger to the emptiness of time.

©2012 by icebox

  



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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-09-09 07:27 AM


Achingly beautiful, dear Charly!

Margherita

ebonygirl
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California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-09-09 12:28 PM


This child, so lovingly freed by your gentle words.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2012-09-09 01:27 PM


chills, as always
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2012-09-09 07:28 PM


VERY well 'penned' !
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
5 posted 2012-09-10 09:24 AM


You fill my eyes with images
and my heart with sadness
very well written
Liz

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2012-09-11 12:31 PM


Sadly beautiful~  

sighing here!

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