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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2012-08-20 07:10 PM

I remember her eyes
like the palm trees
their boyish charm
shaking downward with the mirror less sky

She had her eye-shadow on
rimming just below her eyelashes
like a perfectly still painting

Perfectly eloquent
in her green stare
her pupils slowly narrowing
as the light grew closer.

Those feverish eyes
resonate with the tiles of the floor
capturing the wallpaper of the restaurants decor
Such ease she stared
a quiet nectar,
she sighed.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-08-20 08:46 PM

Enjoyed the way he was captured by her eyes.
Ms. E

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-08-20 10:49 PM

Romance is captured perfectly in this poem as he was lost in her eyes...beautiful...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2012-08-21 03:21 AM

Tomer, you pretty much outdo yourself with every work of art you fashion with such meticulous excellence. I was transported from my study to the restaurant watching the two of you who were completely oblivious of me or anyone or anything else - and the beautiful picture made me think of a poem that Tomer once wrote, called 'Sara's Eyes'. Not back in my study yet . . .

Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (08-22-2012 09:57 AM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-08-21 11:58 AM

Now this was beautiful. Well done, my friend.

j.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

5 posted 2012-08-21 06:12 PM

Ms E-

I'm happy her eyes caught your attention.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2012-08-21 06:12 PM

Startime-

I'm happy you saw it that way. Take care

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

7 posted 2012-08-21 06:14 PM

Owl-

As always, I appreciate your fondness of the poem. Happy it resonated with you so much. And most of all, happy I could take you to that place.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

8 posted 2012-08-21 06:14 PM

J-

I appreciate the love. Happy you enjoyed

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2012-08-25 10:15 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

10 posted 2012-08-26 01:32 AM

James

Happy you enjoyed. Hope you're well

Cheers

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