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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-05-28 10:46 PM

Words

Words not shared – forgotten
Magical heart – not felt
Dreaming of love - unknown
Whispers on the wind – unheard

Words not sang – just silence
Moonbeam glowing – alone
Starlight twinkling – not shared
Falling star seen – unwished

Words not written – forlorn
Breath of spring – caressing
Eyes full of sleep – dreaming
Heart wanted – accepted

Words of vision – offered
Passionate kiss - tasted
A tender touch – given
Words of love – desired

Karen Mc Neil
May 28, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-05-28 11:50 PM

May your "Words" become realized.
Enjoyed, ms. e

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

2 posted 2012-05-29 02:07 AM

fine writing, makes me want to read more!

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2012-05-29 02:17 AM

lovely words, fine penning, thanks for the emotion,

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-05-29 06:10 AM

I hear ya, Karen. Quite a list. If only one is answered the rest will fall in line.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-05-29 12:33 PM

Ah, Jerry and I are on the same page today...
very nice...

j.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2012-05-30 05:08 AM

It feels so good that you went from "Dreaming of love - unknown" to "passionate kiss - tasted", dear Karen.

A whole story unveiled in just a few highly significant and well chosen words. Excellent work.

Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2012-05-30 05:31 AM

May you recieve many many words of love.
I really like these list types of poems they're so directly effective.
Great write Karen!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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