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Open Poetry #48

Take Me

Street Poet
Member

since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

0 posted 2012-05-14 03:35 PM

God put us back together
and I ain't mad about it.
We took a hiatus.
Love can be too intense sometimes.
It can make you run from those
who love you the most.
A reintroduction to the cold world
can provide clarity
about who we want in our lives
and who can give us that warmth.
A duality between the body and soul.
Love isn't a chemical reaction.
It's a decision to stand by the person
who wants to write their life story with you.
Make me feel like we did when we first fell in love.
Take me.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-05-14 03:49 PM

This poem makes us go deep into our thoughts and feelings...well written...

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-05-14 05:33 PM

Very well written and meaningful, Street Poet.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2012-05-14 06:22 PM

I like this

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-05-14 06:33 PM

Very nice appealing message.
Love is tricky stuff!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2012-05-16 12:52 PM

Nice...I believe a part of love is a chemical reaction...James

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

6 posted 2012-05-16 05:03 AM

you always hurt the ones you love, but things can be repaired
enjoyed
Michael

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