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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-05-15 05:38 AM


        
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We hugged.
My hands felt your velvet gown.
My overcoat is old, tattered.
The hug was quickly done.
You wanted to meet with me.
Even though bloodhounds are hot on my trail.
We've no words, they've all been spent.
We silently weep.
Anything else we'd do,
Would all those bitter memories repeat.

©May 11, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-05-15 08:58 AM


That was intense! leaves me wanting more...

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-05-15 09:44 AM


Thanks, Lori. It could use some more story maybe.

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2012-05-15 04:06 PM


Very intriguing, Jerry. I owe you an email.


JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-05-15 04:39 PM


Thanks, Karilea. I'm at the same address.

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Startime1955
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5 posted 2012-05-15 06:04 PM


Very Powerful...and a great read...*HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-05-15 06:06 PM


Thank you Karen, and (((HUGS)) right back atcha.

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ethome
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7 posted 2012-05-16 01:26 AM


Some things are never the same and ya just can't go back them, all you end up doing is living with the memories.
Love this man!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-05-16 05:41 AM


Appreciate the words of wisdom, Eric. Thanks.

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2islander2
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9 posted 2012-05-16 11:26 AM


intense and beautiful, jerry, the link is so strong with this person, trhe scene is sensual and sublime, thanks for the enchantment,

yann

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-05-16 11:35 AM


Thank you, yann, very much.

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