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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-04-09 05:46 AM


         
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blues hangs on a nail
symbol of a cherished love
fondled every day

�April 5, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-04-09 06:16 AM


This doesn't sound blue...


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-04-09 06:21 AM


Well, in my case it really isn't blue, except perhaps for the coloring . . . Thanks and good morning Lori.

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3 posted 2012-04-10 09:10 AM


Ah, Lucille!

You started my day with a smile!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-04-10 09:11 AM


Heehee! Yeah Lucile and B,B, What a wonderful combination. ^Thanks Suthern.
Sunshine
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5 posted 2012-04-10 01:24 PM


I like the way you hold the blues...




JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-04-10 03:10 PM


Haha! Thanks, Karilea , I do appreciate your feelings.

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Margherita
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7 posted 2012-04-12 04:10 AM


Blues and longing go so well together, it is a parameter indeed for the intensity of our feelings.

Beautiful!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-04-12 05:38 AM


Yes they do, and thanks for pointing that out, Margherita. Have a nice day,

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
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9 posted 2012-04-13 10:11 AM


The blues ain't what ya get
When you think your too fat.

Or when you have to settle
For tile on the counter,
Instead of granite.

They are not found in the whine,
Of someone who has to drive an old car.

The blues are Lucelle talking through B.B.
About someone, who has left, someone lost-
someone that done him wrong...gone
And ain't never cummin'back.

That's what I see in your three little lines.

ebonygirl
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10 posted 2012-04-13 10:19 AM


I like the Blues, love the Blues, sometimes
live the Blues. Enjoyed your poem, JP,
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-04-13 10:25 AM


Appreciate your thoughts, Ice, and you thought right. Nobody can pick and sing the blues like the king of blues, B.B. King. There will never be another B.B. Impossible. He's the blues man personified.

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Thanks, Ms. E. Yep, we all live the blues from time to time, that's why B.B. can reach so many diverse folks.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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12 posted 2012-04-13 08:48 PM


Lucille.  That girl could harmonize....
Enjoyed, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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13 posted 2012-04-13 08:50 PM


Heehee / Yes she could, JL.

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