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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2012-01-27 07:16 PM


LOL I am talking from the point of view of my cat Molly. Hope you like!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


I roam the house
in search of my next
victim



Could it be LeeLee
today? Or maybe
her sister
Kaylee?



I do not know
which one
for which to chew


I have LeeLee
in my sights
I am now
in pounce position



Now to make my move



THUMP!
I was not expecting
that glass door
and now
I will pass out

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2012-01-27 07:26 PM


Too cute!
Kat >^..^<

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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Florida, USA
2 posted 2012-01-27 07:31 PM


Thank you!!! This is a common ocuurance with Molly. LOL

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2012-01-27 07:38 PM


Haha! Gotta love it, and I do. Great suspense.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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4 posted 2012-01-27 11:25 PM


Thank you JerryPat2!!! I love leaving people in suspense. Glad you liked!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2012-01-28 12:12 PM


As a "cat person"(4 cats) I so enjoyed this.
                                      Ida

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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6 posted 2012-01-28 12:14 PM


Thank you for your comment!!! I too am a cat person and own 4 cats. LOL I am glad you liked!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2012-01-28 04:51 AM


....lol so very cute and being a cat lover I really enjoyed this - thanks for sharing

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
8 posted 2012-01-28 09:12 AM


LOL - this is awesome.  I love it.  I had a cat that did that very same thing; darn those glass doors and the humans that keep them so clean and clear.
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
9 posted 2012-01-28 10:36 AM


Thank you tracie66 and Nicole for your comments!!! I write a lot of poems about my cats and their mis adventures. LoL

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
10 posted 2012-01-31 03:30 PM


Oh, Molly, you poor little darling kitty cat.  I hope it didn't hurt too much for too long.

Owl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2012-01-31 10:59 PM


Nice writing...reminded me of the time my brother walked into the sliding glass door that went to the den...James
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