How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #46 Archive
 Winter Dance
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Winter Dance

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
secondhanddreampoet
Member Elite
since 11-07-2006
Posts 4763
a 'Universalist' !


0 posted 12-30-2010 10:11 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

                    Winter Dance

Our perception completes each fine image
on such a night of white-winter moon
painted on its background of gentle stars
above the wide silver river running forever
along its homeless way through these endless
   mountain forests.
Here the tender, unbound spirit may dance
in harmonious stillness with all that is living
   and that which is not.

               --- b. e. adams (12/30/2010)
© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
Member Elite
since 06-24-99
Posts 2655
Redlands,CA,USA


1 posted 12-30-2010 10:19 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Your offering had a very Native American feel to it... perfect for the environmentalist in you. An enjoyable read. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 01-30-2000
Posts 2636
Sippin a Timmy's in London


2 posted 12-30-2010 10:44 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I often enjoy a walk in the moonlight ... a clear winter night, air clean and crisp, snow crunching with each footstep ... nature's intent, the only sound ...

enjoyed
ethome
Member Patricius
since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


3 posted 12-31-2010 06:31 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

"Here the tender, unbound spirit may dance
in harmonious stillness with all that is living
   and that which is not."

Beautiful conclusion to a vivid word picture of peace and well being.

Superb write Bruce!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 09-16-2007
Posts 8010
So. El Monte, California


4 posted 12-31-2010 01:23 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Your Celtic spirit lights up your mountain forests beautifully, Bruce. Your words are magick.
                                 Ida
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 11-07-2005
Posts 8424
Durban, South Africa


5 posted 12-31-2010 01:44 PM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Poignant and exquisite, Bruce.

Owl
BluesSerenade
Member Rara Avis
since 10-23-2001
Posts 9867
By the Seaside


6 posted 12-31-2010 06:02 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

You and your poetry are an inspiration to me.  
Your wording and your visuals are so concise.  
I absolutely adore the clean lines and surrounding beauty.

Always a pleasure to read you, dp~
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 09-29-2002
Posts 20064
Florida, USA


7 posted 12-31-2010 07:36 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #46 >> Winter Dance Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors