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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-11 11:06 AM


Time and time again I’ve walked though life alone
And only trusting in myself alone….
Always feeling like I have no where to run
My life’s always been stuck in a bind….
Never reaching for the bright and shining stars
Always stuck being the darkest of the dark….
Wondering alone, and scared though it all with out anyone to hold my hand
Slipping and falling time and time again on the steep and slippery path….
Till the day I’ve met you
You said I wouldn’t ever had to walk alone….
That finally I had someone to trust in
And that I would have someone to run to….
You said I don’t need to feel like I’m suck in a bind
Because I’m stronger and smarter then that….
That I can reach for those bright and shining stars
As long as I try…..
And I wouldn’t ever  have to walk alone
But I just have to take it one step at a time….
And if I shall slip and fall
That you would be right there to catch me….
Before I fall to far
I just have to have faith and try…..
And just put everyone who put me down
Behind me and keep going on with my life……
Because I can do it by just having faith

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1 posted 2010-07-11 02:11 PM


From one tattooed sweetheart to another - that was a heartwarming first post.  Welcome to Passions I hope you will like it here as much as we all do.

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2 posted 2010-07-11 08:29 PM


Faith, TS, can be so much a part of
one's life; as can hope, aspiration,
and sticktoittiveness...

something tells me you have all of that.

Welcome to Passions!

Please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

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KRJ

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3 posted 2010-07-11 09:38 PM



I just have to have faith and try…..
And just put everyone who put me down
Behind me and keep going on with my life……
Because I can do it by just having faith

Well you certainly have the right attitude

and if you abide by those words of wisdom
you will finish up the winner. good luck.

Lindsay

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4 posted 2010-07-11 11:26 PM


A VERY admirable first post...
I only wish I would have written it.

Welcome to Passions!!!

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

tattooedsweetheart07
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5 posted 2010-07-12 07:50 AM


Thanks dear,
It means alot to me that you think that... it's cuz of you that I wrote this one. Your the one who said don't give up, and keep writting.

tattooedsweetheart07
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6 posted 2010-07-12 10:21 AM


Thank you everyone who read my poem and commented on it... I really would love to know what everyone thinks of my writting... it's a way for me to improve on what I write by what you think.
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