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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-11 11:09 AM



The day you died
You left me alone, to cry
Tears of sadness that no one understands
Why they are falling like shooting stars, racing to earth
When I think about the day you died
It makes me upset that no one could tell me why
They said it was the shot
That the evil doctor gave you that took your life
When you were here on earth with me I was happy
But now I just sit around and blame myself for you going away
I wish I would have knew you more,
Then just a few letters and long distance phone calls
You broke my heart when you went away
When will I meet you again? Does anyone know??
I know that when I look at the horizon of the setting of the sun
You'll be there watching me and protecting me
Why did God take you away?
The day you died, no one could believe that you were gone
I kept telling myself that you would wake back up
I see you in my dreams and in my thoughts
I just want you to know that you still have a place in my heart
And we'll meet again when I die
I just want to say I love you and I wish I would have known you more
And I found out only God knows why

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1 posted 2010-07-11 02:12 PM


Strange how we in an entire lifetime never get to really know each other, and then suddenly you are taken away.  Nicely done.

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2 posted 2010-07-11 09:51 PM



A very sad and poignant post and I can see you wrote it from your heart. It just

doesn't seem fair when our loved ones are
taken before their time. Keep your chin up
my dear and take care.

Lindsay

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3 posted 2010-07-11 11:24 PM


...Tears of sadness that no one understands
Why they are falling like shooting stars, racing to earth...

These words are very descriptive...
I truly enjoyed reading this, and look forward to reading more.

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

tattooedsweetheart07
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4 posted 2010-07-12 07:48 AM


Thanks everyone. And Ringo, cuz of you I'm on here adding my work, since you said it needs to be read by people who would enjoy it... I can't thank you enough dear... **hugs**
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