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Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
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0 posted 2010-06-29 03:22 PM



I sit here, working away, listening to music.
I pause often, just to hear and feel some pieces.
“Pavane pour une infante defunte”, slow and stately,
so sad and melodic.  I stop typing to absorb it.

“Moonlight Sonata”, I stop again and close my eyes.
This melody is physical for me, a wave of emotion
That crosses my heart and mind.  Again I stop typing.
I am held in place by the pulsing of the notes.

“Ice Crystals” now I have moved into New Age.
The sounds of crystalline notes ripple, backed by the sound
of wind swishing by, going somewhere out in space.
The ice crystals of a comet passing close to our ball of earth.

Finally, something more modern?  Peter Gabriel grieves with me
from the soundtrack of City of Angels.  How I wish I could have
said those words first, he grieves so beautifully and deeply.
This song lingers in my soul, I want to “let it out and move on”

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-06-29 06:53 PM


Enjoyed...James
Denise
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2 posted 2010-07-03 02:04 PM


Beautifully done, Eldest!
Richy
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3 posted 2010-07-04 06:20 AM



That was so cool, I don't listen to classical music but I could still imagine the vibe of these different types of music as you penned away this wonderful piece.

Thanks for sharing your special words and your love for music, it was grand!

Happy Fourth of July Eldest!
Richard

2islander2
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4 posted 2010-07-04 12:35 PM


let  it out and move on....So wise, enjoyed my read.

regards

yann

Eterne
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since 2010-07-21
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Quebec, Canada
5 posted 2010-07-25 10:30 PM


Very nicely done!

I am not sure if the word "pieces" is the best one in the first stanza, but otherwise it feels like listening to the music. Brava!

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
6 posted 2010-07-25 10:34 PM


Music is the soul of life. Beautiful!
Kat >^..^<

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