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Open Poetry #46
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vandana
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0 posted 2010-05-08 10:31 AM


Second Time
This Is second time
That I said it to you
Do you really want to go
From here
Second time
To tell you right
To make you understand
To make you right
Please stay with me
This is second time
I am telling you
I will be lonely
If you leave
I want you to stay with me
This is the night
We have together
This is right time
To follow your heart
Second time around


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-05-08 10:34 AM

Yo dear Vandana,

This poem has a nice idea.  Sometimes that's the way it is.

Love Bobby
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2010-05-08 12:24 PM

beautiful thoughts
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