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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-05-01 03:27 PM


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Not the same wasp
I saw last year—

May outside my window


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Bastet
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1 posted 2010-05-07 04:13 AM


I like the conciseness and the imagery in this poet. It's an art to say some much in so few words. Also allows the reader to conjure up her own images.
2islander2
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2 posted 2010-05-08 09:58 AM


Hello John, -things are never the same, or are there always the same, greek philosophy said both, and we don't have answers now...The shortness of the poem is full of surprises...

thanks

yann

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3 posted 2010-05-08 10:24 AM



LeeJ
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4 posted 2010-05-08 12:27 PM


John, I liked...
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