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First Season Musings. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Like me the wind sighs long, spring has arrived, bringing hope. Bright, soft green leaves,dress trees. Flowers rejoice the warmer arrived days. Bird clocks started,the race for new life their only concern now. We sit on, watching, wishing for something, anything, other than what we have,do we live too long?Should we live as wild creatures, short but imediately urgent lives? Frenetically living life fully, no lingering? Counting the seasons stretching on before us, warm amber sun on our faces, beauty of wild things held in our hearts safely, do we need or want anything more? Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sigh long too, thinking of chocolates and soaps and grand English things  you are a great friend and I love your views |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I really like that first line. You captured the feelings well and ponder some interesting questions... makes you wonder. All moments are relative, so it's important to savour them... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"To all things there is a season." I don't know if I can answer your queston even for myself... Are we even ready for more than we have been given? I am in awe of small birds, and life that reflects the wonder of creation, because moments are what we have, and are often the sum of it all. Lovely work! Karen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I couldn't have said it better than Karen. Great reply to this excellent poem. Ida |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Should we live as wild creatures~ I like that idea...well you already know I like it lol... ~VQ  |
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