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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2010-05-03 07:00 AM





    


Twenty golden drops,
one by one, sweet savor,
sunshine in a bottle,

upon my soft skin,
they land, warm,
sprinkles of love,

One drop behind my ear,
one drop upon my wrist,
one drop behind my knee,

One drop for my lips,
others fall where they may,
soaked like a flower,

dainty as a peach,
I head out the door,
wearing you all over,

Your favorite smell,
bathed me for charm,
now I am off to bloom,

In the garden of the world,
as I walk by, men stare,
basking in vanilla,

French vanilla,
like silky smoothe icecream,
tasty and yummy,
my perfume of choice!

© Copyright 2010 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
srizah
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 34
India
1 posted 2010-05-03 07:37 AM


The title "She Smells Like a Lady" is very good. The object of the verse *in the end" was french vanilla

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2010-05-03 02:23 PM


Thanks for your reply  

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (05-04-2010 02:43 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2010-05-03 03:08 PM


aaaatttchewooo nice perfume...snuck up and covered up my Cohiba like a muffler on a swallow.  (grin)
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