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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2010-04-24 07:00 PM


God has created
every being on earth
for a specific purpose.  

He created Bones
to look deeply into
the soul of man.  

Bones will file his report soon.  

Bobby

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Denise
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1 posted 2010-04-24 09:56 PM


Good one, Bobby!
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2010-04-24 10:07 PM


Thanks dear Denise,

I'm very pleased that this poem worked well for you.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-04-25 03:32 AM


Good one indeed. Bobby.
                   Ida

Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-04-25 08:27 AM


A really good addition in the Bones saga.  This one sticks out.
Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2010-04-25 05:15 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2010-04-25 05:16 PM


Thanks Earl,

I'm glad it worked for you.

Bobby

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 2010-04-26 11:33 PM


Haaa... At first this one made me laugh. Truly a bit of humor here.  Then, I got to thinking a little deeper about it. That's when the serious side kicked in. Sort of a double whammy. I like this one quite a bit. It has that Harlen Ellison feel to it... one of my favorite authors. Thanks for the treat.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Honeybee
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8 posted 2010-04-26 11:41 PM


This is probably one of the best in the Bones series....I agree with what Andrew said beause that was my reaction and introspection too!
MorningStar
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9 posted 2010-04-27 10:28 AM


I've given this some thought and now have come to the conclusion that...Bones is the man!!  Loved this one.

Aenea  

If I don't say it...who will?

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2010-04-27 03:01 PM


I doubt that Bones' report will ever be complete - so much to see.  Chipping away at the invisible isn't easy or speedy but at least his purpose will have long tenure.

Helen

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2010-04-27 07:52 PM


Thanks Andrew,

I've not read anything by Harlen Ellison.  I'll have to try him out.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2010-04-27 07:53 PM


Thanks dear Honeybee,

I'm very happy you liked the poem.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2010-04-27 07:55 PM


Thanks dear Aenea,

I'm pleased the poem worked for you.

Bones says thanks for your kind words.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2010-04-27 07:56 PM


Thanks dear Helen,

For the kind words.  

Bones is working on it.

Love Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-28-2010 04:47 PM).]

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