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Elias Nevermore
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0 posted 2010-01-02 12:09 PM


A light beckons me, and I fall down. Collapsing is the gateway to a higher plane.

Feelings are gone, dissipated into the endless dark. I revert to the way I was made.

Creator shatters the hollow box, allowing hope to escape. I have not been saved.

Souls float above my ethereal form. I see an old aquaitance pass on by, so I wave.

Shots are fired, silence shatters, as light breaks through the dark, and I awake.

Images flash before my eyes. I see flies scatter away from their inevitable fate.

As my hollow form takes its usual shape, I see the world once again. I have been saved.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar poe

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Elias Nevermore
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1 posted 2010-01-02 11:53 PM


i know replying on your own topic is usually frowned upon.

but I would just like to say that this will be my final post on piptalk for the next 2 years.

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