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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
I knew this would never happen The messages were lost in the blink of an eye She was lost in a sea of confusion That motto is such a lie The only fish i could ever catch has swam away I feel so lost and useless Is this how we are supposed to be? Nothing can keep my sanity You were everything i could be Is there something wrong with me? I looked into a soul of heart and destiny All i got was some one who didn't care Where did i go wrong? The dirty lies she told Was what ruined me I don't believe anything anymore This is whats wrong with me She never listened to a word i said She laughed it off and thought of a way to b The love i felt for her has vanished in one excuse This relationship never left the ground I said you must confess that you never loved me from the get go The last word she said was yes The line that broke me this time |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
love is sometimes a cruel thing, but its always worth getting back up its not defeat only a minor detour from where youre supposed to be |
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LivingConfused Junior Member
since 2009-12-27
Posts 40 |
gdcod3player welcome. I am new here also. This is a good place with helpful people. When on the dark side of love it is lonely and confusing. There are two lines I like and empathize with. "The only fish i could ever catch has swam away" "I said you must confess that you never loved me from the get go The last word she said was yes The line that broke me this time" I am curious about this. "She laughed it off and thought of a way to b" |
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