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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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0 posted 2011-10-24 11:58 PM



The air has changed from warm to biting.
The leaves have turned from green to red.
And though this season’s brought some fighting,
There’s no one I would want instead.

*Amber

© Copyright 2011 Amber Corcoran - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-25 07:04 AM


Interesting that you would use the season's change to air out some problems, but it worked quite well. We can fuss and fight, but when we get right down to it, we don't lose the reason we are together in the first place. That is true love.

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-10-30 11:07 AM


Aww this is so nice, change is a good thing any way you slice it.  It's just that we don't always understand the reasons why, we can't fight what is.  
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
3 posted 2011-10-30 04:20 PM


Making up is a nice thing too,
Enjoyed, ms. e

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-10-30 05:28 PM


it's not all fun and games, my friend, it's all about your gumption to stick out in the bad times too...that's what make it work.

j.

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