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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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I had never thought that I was missing a puzzle piece yet here you are for you For you I would write a million words and tie them together cross oceans vast spaces just to reach your ears For you I will tame my fires let the embers burn deep I will keep you warm I have been loved I have been held in hearts but I've kept them like ghosts inside never to touch always haunted but, you I hold you in my heart I hold you in my marrow I will take you with me You, I will keep you close |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chelsea... Long time, no read, darling girl. Welcome home! "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Liked this form and the subject, and the way you took on the subject. Doubly loved, "I have been loved / I have been held in hearts / but I've kept them like ghosts inside" ~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the sincerity...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
You have a great talent to connect with the reader in a touching way. This is why I always read you poems. Juju -Juju |
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