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cheychey101
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since 2011-04-06
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Mn, USA

0 posted 2011-06-23 07:49 PM



I try so hard to smile,
and make it last a while,
I try so hard to be happy,
but it'll never happen.

Those icy tears rain,
down hard on my torn heart.
Those tears are caused by my horrific pain,
They help tear me apart.

Friends, I don't have,
Someone to trust in,
where are they?
Someone to tell my secrets to,
Who?

What do you when all is gone?
When everything that is able to,
has gone wrong?
What am I to do?


© Copyright 2011 Cheyanne - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-06-23 09:31 PM


Cheyanne, behind every storm, there's a clearing, and sometimes a rainbow. But we have to get through the tempest to find the joy.

Welcome to Passions! I hope you continue to write and share your passions, here along with so many of your peers, for a long time to come.

Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

AmyLynn
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 4
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2011-06-25 05:43 PM


Chayenne,
My sisters name was CHEYENNE. We called her Chey or CheyChey, what a coincidence!
I loved your poem. It is so much like some of hers. Visit my website and see for yourself.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2011-06-26 01:00 PM


A touching read. Thanx for sharing... ~Coco~
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2011-06-26 01:22 PM


Chayenne
Welcome to pip.
The answer to you question will be given in the passing of time.
Hope you find it soon..
Enjoyed the poem though, hope writing will help you through the crisis.

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