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FloraScars
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since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA

0 posted 2011-05-22 10:00 PM



Think of a place
Where the birds sing their song
All the days are nice and long

Beautiful land vast and free
As far as the eye can see
You may accuse it to be a dream

Don't be too quick to judge
This land is enchanting
Keep in mind dear it's still morning

Stay and see the gorgeous sun set
You have yet to experience
It's breath taking radiance

So follow me down
Far away from this town
Somewhere far better than where we are

Are you ready to go
Darling this is our fate
There's no reason to wait

"Love is a dance. Some have it easy and others struggle."

© Copyright 2011 Flora Papadimitriou - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-05-23 08:26 AM


The escape you propose sounds very captivating, dear Flora. We are able to create the most perfect places in dreams. Hopefully we shall be able to make this dream manifest in reality. It will mean that every place on this awesome Earth will radiate its intrinsic beauty and we shall live happily ... ever after.



Very nice work.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

AlCowie
Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92
London, UK
2 posted 2011-05-23 07:38 PM


Nice journey
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