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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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velvet amber fire ice in captured memories life's redemption songs ©2011 by icebox |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Deep and tight, my friend, really like the last line... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Excellent imagery and profound emotions in this, dear Charly. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You never mix your words, and that is what makes your poetry so special. Strong stuff, icebox~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said, Charly! Helen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Charly...The title is as important as the three lines of this short and meaningful poem. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like short poems, they are powerful and direct! Juli |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I can't say it any better than Juli. Love powerful and direct. This is brilliant. Ida |
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