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Word Weaver
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0 posted 2011-04-13 03:21 PM



"Yesterday"

Birds are singing ...without harmony
Sun is shining ....without warmth
Blooming flowers ...provide no scent
Paper... is curling ...pen ...running dry
My world ....is void
of color

I remember inspiration
~A yesterday thing

The great man is dead...I cannot write

© Marcia Miller-Twiford
2/2011




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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-04-13 03:28 PM


I'm sorry you cannot write because this was good! I love it when poets write about not being able to write (myself included)
Lori

dreamgal
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since 2011-03-17
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2 posted 2011-04-13 03:47 PM


I thought this was very pretty, for someone who cant write, I agree with lori. And sometimes in a twisted way, ive found some of my best writing when I describe my feelings of not being able to write.

Dreamgal

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-04-13 03:50 PM


You did quite enough to get the message across.

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-04-13 03:55 PM


Thank you Jerry. I guess someday I'll get use to the loss and write of different things. For now it works as therapy for me and it helps that he's channeling. Gone? Yes, but still everywhere.


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