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porky118
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since 2011-03-31
Posts 15
minnesota

0 posted 2011-03-31 01:51 PM


We push and we pull
Putting love to test
We kiss and we fight
We try to make it all right
With our faces on the floor
I see that we have failed
So we help each other up
With a kiss on the cheek it says a good bye
And we turn our own ways hopeing time will just pass by


Its not long till our paths cross agian
A glimps of your eyes sends be into a fall
My heart starts to patter as you grow near
Just a kiss on the cheek sends me into a fright
And as i turn i thought i was right
I quickly told you that i loved you
And then you said "I have found another guy to replace you so dont be sad"


I knew one day that she would come back
But when she returned it looked like she had been cracked
I asked whats wrong and she didn't say a thing
I told her i would find him if it was the last thing i do
And thats when she said i have always loved you




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twistedpup
Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115

1 posted 2011-03-31 05:10 PM


wow what a romeo, lol.
Some girl is gonna be real lucky to have you.

smiles* keep writing, its always nice to have a new perspective on love.

*hugs*

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