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klw333 New Member
since 2011-03-10
Posts 1 |
The first man to hold me The first man to see me cry Fourteen years went by Then you decided to end you life You made a promise Daddy why did you break it I know times were hard You were hurting Mom was leaving you Things just werent working The letters O and D Put them together and what do they mean Selfish How could you act so helpless Every night at 11:11 I make a wish For time to rewind Life to give you a chance one last time Every night the same wish For you to not have been so selfish |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..i never know what to say..i'm sorry; one feels the pain..>>spiros |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
In his thoughts life wasn't worth living. I'm sorry for your pain and anger. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's very sad, but for some the burden of life's pains becomes unbearable. We should not judge, though it feels like being abandoned. The secret to stop your nightmares is to forgive him. Intense first offering. Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I agree with the words Margherita wrote. Sometimes we just do not see the suffering others are burdened with, no matter how close they are to us. Please forgive and love the man you loved. He did not do this to hurt you. He has not changed just gone away because it was too hard for him to continue on. best to you, latearrival |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
wow intense, im here though you dont know me, i will listen. *hugs* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hard hitting...and full of truth. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
welcome to PiP...your write has a raw honesty to it that you cannot often find...painful, gripping piece of work...well done |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Welcome to PIP! Your poem is very sad and well written. I look forward to reading more from you. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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