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twistedpup
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since 2011-02-25
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0 posted 2011-03-10 09:14 PM



The nights are cold around here.
The days are getting longer.
Twists and turns down every road we travel.
Sometimes we need an adventure.

That truck like thunder
as it shifts into gear.
The ride is exciting and new,
glad its with you.
Driving out to that place, our hide away.
Longing for your arms around me,
aching to fill and endless hunger.

Knowing your stay is short,
just wanting to see you.
Maybe feel your arms around me,
but not much more.
Ending this thought wondering
what else we will do.
*hugs*

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-03-11 04:46 PM


Adventures can be fun!


steavenr
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2 posted 2011-03-13 09:13 PM


"That truck like thunder
as it shifts into gear.
The ride is exciting and new,
glad its with you.
Driving out to that place, our hide away.
Longing for your arms around me,
aching to fill an endless hunger"

...there is a lonesome romanticism to this that makes it irresistible  

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