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Open Poetry #47

grand seductress

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-03-03 12:22 PM

death wears
a red dress
as she turns
a cold cheek
to the wind
swaying to
an island song

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2011-03-04 01:16 AM

Not sure I understand this one Faith.
However, it has a bite to it that I'm sure fulfilled something in your desire to get it out.
Enjoyed.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2011-03-04 01:48 AM

excellent visual--

a femme fatale of beckoning promise...

so striking, so good.

Love it.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-03-04 08:22 AM

This is perfect: Take Eric's and Serenity's responses and stir them together and that's exactly what I would have said.

Nice one Faith!
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-03-04 08:31 AM

Whot? Huh? Wha'd'ja say? I hear voodoo drums in the background. Full moon. Chicken sacrifice. Or is that human sacrifice?

~ Never did I feel more devoted to my wife than after biting the wild garlic of treachery ~

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