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Karleygirl
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since 2010-08-05
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0 posted 2011-03-02 08:22 PM


An acorn gives life to a thosand trees
many tiny raindrops form the greatest seas
nothing is impossible if only we tried,
the smallest tree can reach the sky...

People are snowflakes, each one unique,
we may differ in ideas but then we'll see...
And some flowers flourish in feiry, desert sands,
hate can turn into love in any land...

War must cease, peace must prevail,
with a world of peace, we cannot fail.
Lets share the honey and milk today,
because where there is a "I will" there is a way

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-03-02 08:53 PM


I like your philosophy, Karley...

And we can continue to hope, can't we?

Karilea/Sunshine


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-03-02 09:41 PM


Nice thoughts...James
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2011-03-02 10:54 PM


I echo the previous posts.
Very nice positive thoughts.

Eric

the writer views a critic like a fire hydrant would view a dog

faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
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Poe Haven, USA
4 posted 2011-03-02 11:14 PM


very nicely done...i enjoyed your poem a lot.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2011-03-03 01:50 AM




I enjoyed your thoughts too Karley
well expressed.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2011-03-04 07:52 AM


In its simplicity a profound message
very sweet

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