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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-02-19 11:01 PM

whisper to me where ere you are
though I know you not
I will hear your voice
matters not where I am
your words will be delightful
will cause a smile
ere though I sleep
the sleep of yearning for
mystery woman of my dreams
lovers are lovers
only if they love truthfully
dreaming of distant strangers
who dream same dreams as do you
whisper words of eternal love
I will accept them into my heart
where they shall live forever
bolstering my own commitment
to our eventual physical entanglement
overflowing with sweet honey
for you to taste
forever shall our love be real
I call upon the great gods as witness
I taste your sweetness
in slumber which you bequeath to me
so do you accept from me
that which I provide so willingly
it's like a soft brushing across my mouth
the taste of love is exquisite
as the nights multiply
I take pleasure from your beautiful
unknown face
I feel your eyes upon mine
across the void we chance to meet
in wondrous, pleasing dreams
I awake knowing we will
someday
someway
surely make our dreams come true

In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-02-19 11:20 PM

OOHH! I have to fan myself after reading this one! Very passionate and heartfelt!
Kat >^..^<

To live is to love
To love is to live

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-02-20 12:36 PM

Lovely, Jerry. I hope she listens. Smiles.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-02-20 02:10 AM

..indeed, Jerry, well expressed; if one person can move a mountain, what may a man and woman in love do..?

..>>spiros
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-02-20 08:31 AM

Haha! Thank you, Kat for reading and commenting on my poem.

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Owl, maybe she is listening, or maybe I'm just whistling in the dark.

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You are right about how love combined with teamwork can move mountains, Spiros. Thanks for being here.

In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-02-20 10:30 AM

Jerry glad you are back and how! Set some pulses to racing with this one guy. Gotta love it!
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-02-20 10:56 AM

Hi Lori. Oh, I was never quite "away," just cooling my heels a bit. Thank you for your support, it is greatly appreciated.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-02-20 12:05 PM

This is so beautiful, JerryPat I couldn't help but be moved by it. Excellent writing!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-02-20 03:19 PM

Thank you, Faith. I am always happy when a poem I have written appeals to someone. It makes it all worthwhile.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2011-02-21 03:01 AM

Love the positive nature of this piece. Also love the dreamy aspect.
It's a wonderful relaxing read.
You are an ol romantic aren't you?

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-02-21 06:57 AM

Aw, maybe so, Eric. Sssh. Don't spread it around.

Thank you for being here.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

11 posted 2011-02-21 11:53 AM

~oh my~~~ what a lovely summoning~~

~enjoyed your whisper, Jer~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

12 posted 2011-02-21 12:43 PM

I have no doubt that someday your dreams will come true. A captivating write, Jerry! Much enjoyed - yes, indeed. Oh, well, you know we women are pushovers for this kind of "dreamy" write.

Helen

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2011-02-21 06:21 PM

Thank you so much, Bel1e / Appreciate you listening to my whisper.

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You know, Helen, I have heard that before / It really must be true / Haha! / Thanks for stopping, reading and commenting.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2011-02-24 07:48 AM

Your "whisper" promised well and it has maintained the promise. Without dreams the world would be a cold place.

Enjoyed your romantic write very much.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

15 posted 2011-02-24 09:31 AM

Thank you very much, Margherita. I don't write love poems as often as I should I guess.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2011-02-24 06:49 PM

I like the warm...

and I like that dreams
are shared...

and I also like
that I've had similar dreams,
but please do change the scenario
just a little...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

17 posted 2011-02-24 07:28 PM

Sorry, Sunshine, I'm not sure I understand how I would change the scenario. It rambles along with dips and curves, but eventually ends with hope in the heart.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

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