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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-02-18 11:29 AM





Afloat on the sea of her abandon
sated to her contented core
The smolder in her eyes
cooled to a smoky haze
She sighs a silky pleasured purr
as she stretches out into
delicious drowsy drifting…
When his wanting touch
rekindled her skin
again.



LGR©2/18/11

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faithmairee
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1 posted 2011-02-18 11:39 AM


made her toes curl, did he? hot, hot, hot! love this one, Lori!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-02-18 11:43 AM


Ah yes, those wanting touches. This poem is wantonly done.

In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-02-18 06:46 PM


Faith and Jerry - thanks for stopping by!  Always good to hear from you two.
Lori

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2011-02-18 09:01 PM


..very nice..
Sunshine
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5 posted 2011-02-19 10:43 AM


It was like watching a kitten
on a raft,
turning decidedly into a
feline panther...
just waiting to pounce



Enjoyed the images

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-02-19 12:11 PM


Spiros thank you

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2011-02-19 12:12 PM


Sunshine I appreciate your commentary!
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