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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-01-15 03:14 PM



WISDOM
December 1998

You need some grey hair to be wise,
And four legs and a tail
And you need to be able to whinny.

My horse has good compassionate council
for all issues,
be they bad,
mad,
or sad.
He exudes a wave of calm benevolence
over all
who fall
under his spell
and problems slither into perspective
and dissipate.

So, if you have a problem you can’t solve,
simply
get a mature, wise horse.

Owl

© Copyright 2011 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
faithmairee
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Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-01-15 03:21 PM


i love everything about this poem...period. The ending is really awesome.  Great poem, Owl!


Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
2 posted 2011-01-15 03:55 PM


..>>this is a quite "together" poem; it sings
throughout..>>spiros

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2011-01-15 04:08 PM


excellent tribute to the wisdom of friends on 4 legs!


Sunshine
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4 posted 2011-01-15 04:17 PM


And four legs and a tail
And you need to be able to whinny.

~*~

I agree!

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
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5 posted 2011-01-15 04:41 PM


Chuckling at the vision in my mind, but dead serious at the reality of your words.

Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2011-01-15 05:07 PM


Think of all that money you would save on therapy. I would say you are on target here.
                      Ida

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2011-01-16 12:21 PM


Thank you, Faith.

Thank you, Spiros.  Yes, everything about my horse sang/sings!

Thank you, Bruce.  Flicka was/is wisdom, love and everything good.

Yep, Karilea, important pre-requisites!  Thanks.

Yes,  Jerry, you “got it” completely!  Thanks.

Exactly, Ida!  I have never had therapy.  I had Flicka and still do and it is amazing what Flicka can still do from Heaven!  Thanks.

Owl

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