navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Friday
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic Friday Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-01-10 11:31 AM


.


The phone
Rings

Once
Twice
Three times

What words
Can evade
The decades
In between

No one waits
No one comes
With soothing balms
Or joyous reckonings

So what is left
As suits both ends
Is silence


.

© Copyright 2011 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2011-01-10 11:56 AM


loved your ending...it is...masterful
great write

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-01-10 01:34 PM


Haunting write, John. Just beautiful.
                            Ida

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2011-01-10 01:36 PM


I too thought the ending capped this cascade of thoughts off perfectly.

Eric

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2011-01-10 09:29 PM


But...the phone rang...
and someone picked it up...
a connection of silence...

profound.


faithmairee
Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
5 posted 2011-01-10 09:36 PM


very nicely penned...i enjoyed your poem alot.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2011-01-11 07:00 AM


I'll echo whats already been said. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
7 posted 2011-01-11 10:34 AM


.


Thanks for reading


...................


Silence


I have known the silence of the stars and the sea,
And the silence of the city when it pauses,
And the silence of a man and a maid,
And the silence for which music alone finds the word,
And the silence of the woods before the winds of spring begin,
And the silence of the sick
When their eyes roam about the room.

And I ask:  For the depths
Of what use is language?

A beast in the field  moans a few times
When death takes its young.
And we are voiceless in the presence of realities---
We cannot speak.

A curious boy asks an old soldier
Sitting in front of the grocery store,
“How did you lose your leg?”
And the old soldier is struck with silence,
Or his mind flies away
Because he cannot concentrate it on Gettysburg.
It comes back jocosely
And he says, “ A bear bit it off.”
And the boy wonders, while the old soldier
Dumbly, feebly lives over
The flashes of guns, the thunder of cannon,
The shrieks of the slain,
And himself lying on the ground,
And the hospital surgeons, the knives,
and the long days in bed.
But if he could describe it all
He would be an artist
But if he were an artist there would be deeper wounds
Which he could not describe.

There is a silence of great hatred,
And the silence of great love,
And the silence of a deep peace of mind,

And the silence of an embittered friendship,

There is the silence of a spiritual crisis,
Through which your soul, exquisitely tortured,
Comes with visions not to be uttered
Into a realm of higher life.

And the silence of the gods who understand each other without speech,
There is the silence of defeat.

There is the silence of those unjustly punished;
And the silence of the dying whose hand
Suddenly grips yours.

There is the silence between father and son,
When the father cannot explain his life,
Even though he be misunderstood for it.

There is the silence that comes between husband and wife.
There is the silence of those who have failed;
And the vast silence that covers
Broken nations and vanquished leaders.

There is the silence of Lincoln,
Thinking of the poverty of his youth.
And the silence of Napoleon
After Waterloo.

And the silence of Jeanne d’ Arc
Saying amid the flames, “Blessèd Jesus”---
Revealing in two words all sorrow, all hope.

And there is the silence of age,
Too full of wisdom for the tongue to utter it
In words intelligible to those who have not lived
The great range of life.

And there is the silence of the dead.

If we who are in life cannot speak
Of profound experiences,
Why do you marvel that the dead
Do not tell you of death?

Their silence shall be interpreted
As we approach them.



Edgar Lee Masters


....................


Thanks again


John


.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Friday

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary