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Legacy Member
since 2011-01-08
Posts 60Louisiana |
Lost love trickled like downpour Water suffocates. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Powerful melancholy expression. Well done!! Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well, I was going to highlight the middle part and quote it, but shoot...the whole things good...nice work |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Works for me, good job on painting pain. Lori |
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Legacy Member
since 2011-01-08
Posts 60Louisiana |
Thanks Eric, and steavenr, you too for the compliment. Lori, thank you for you kindness. A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Aww... this sad little piece is... well... sad! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
A little rain must fall to appreciate the sun, XGarapanX. Thank you for your comment. Suicidal twin kills sister by mistake! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Rain, at times, can be suffocating eh? Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Legacy Member
since 2011-01-08
Posts 60Louisiana |
Yes, rain, the life giver can absolutely become our own worst enemy, especially if it is raining inside our souls, Trina. Thank you. A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. They don't bother Warlocks. |
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