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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I hate it when I feel invisible. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when I was nekkid they didn't notice me either...now that I wear the speedo and cowboy boots they all laugh..guess they just needed some color to get a tickle going? cool slice of the saturday evening post JP |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, it's a very uncaring world. Like you're writing here a great amount of people don't see the needs of others just the wants of their own pleasure. However, not all of mankind can be grouped in that catagory but there are times when most people feel like the character in this poem. I thought the theme and the main character were very well imaged. Very enjoyable read Jerry. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I hear you, Lori, loud and clear. <><><><> I guess it is feast or famine, DS. At least being laughed at means you are making some kind of impression. <><><><> Ah, it's natural to think of yourself, if you don't . . . who? I just observe the world where we have massive, instant communications and we still wind up hating one another. so the communication alley is a one way street it seems. Thanks, Eric. Born Free........Taxed to Death |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
cojones clicking together like castanets now thats poetic. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hahaha!! I thought so, Mike, but you were the only one to say so, and that entitles you to the Kewpie doll. You can pick it up on your way out, and thank you. ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, which makes us intolerant by default.—July 26, 2010 ~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Jerry...All I could think of was how cold you must be. Here's a blanket for ya and a hug. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thanks Martie. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jerry Here's a pair of warm boots to go along with that blanket. Here's a sterno and a couple cans of soup in case the power goes out and you end up with the boys under the bridge. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Thanks Eric. ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
quote: Such truth. In a world with little compassion, how does one communicate with another? heh I'll ponder that. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Appreciate the read and comments, Trina, thank you very much. ~ Intolerant people are the people who do not believe the way we want them to, |
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