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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2009-09-19 08:58 PM

Isn't it nice when those we have loved and lost come visit us... for my first love.

Hey, hey, hey
You came to play
You came while I was sleeping
But no matter we still had fun
Driving the big red bus
Along our street
Well, make believe that is
And we got to play that silly name game too
You know when you would always choose R
And I would always choose D
And there was lots of laughter as should be
I hope you come visit again
During my wake time would be nice
Though we both know that can’t be
Your beautiful face hasn’t changed
Your lovely red hair is still long and shaggy
Your body still lean and tall
There is just so much I miss about you
But hey, thanks again
For finding me in Paris no less
You smiled my night time dreams
Just perfectly...

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-09-19 09:17 PM

RDB,

What a lovely poem you shared with us. It's sweet and made me smile. I love when first loves visit.

Love you too,
A

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-09-19 11:51 PM

What a lovely poem, Roniese. One of my favorites of yours.
Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-09-20 01:09 AM

Bonjour, Always loving memories ~ Treasure those moments, Roniece.

Hope you're having fun in Paris!!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-09-20 10:07 AM

I find this absolutely exquisite, dear Roniece.
I am happy that your first love visits you in dreams.
It is a touch that brings sweetness and comfort.

Wonderfully penned!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2009-09-20 12:41 PM

sounds like a blissful moment
youve captured it !!!!!!!!!!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2009-09-20 03:18 PM

Dear Roniece, sounds like you had a wonderful dream there my friend, hope you have many more the same, relax time does you well, smile your days and take care.

Rick

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2009-09-20 03:30 PM

ms r&b, a perfect reunion it seems, in thought and pen

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

8 posted 2009-09-20 05:19 PM

I wish my first love had been this beautiful. What a wonderful inspiration.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2009-09-20 10:20 PM

What a lovely poignant post this is my

sweet Roniece, you captured the moment so
well. Thanks for sharing, love
Lindsay

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

10 posted 2009-09-20 11:06 PM

Another lovely poem, Roniece. You always make me smile.

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