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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2009-09-02 11:34 AM



I Deserve To Be Kissed

wake me when I am sleeping
and the moon still hangs high
breathe in me             life
hold me like you need me
a passion that will ripple
with me through the day,   stay
in the moments of darkened hush
sing me your love song lullaby
harmony of sighs heartbeat
place your lips on mine
I deserve to be kissed
touch me in the hollow places
completely I am yours

"I'm so hard to handle
I'm selfish and I'm sad."
— Joni Mitchell



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Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-09-02 11:46 AM


Wow.
Don't we all? lol

Loved this sensual filled beauty.

suthern
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2 posted 2009-09-02 12:41 PM


If I only have time to read one poem today, I'll be smiling with my choice. *S* I love this... and am nodding a heartfelt AMEN! *S*
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-09-02 12:49 PM


ms slick...

a bag of Hershey's Kisses with Almonds is in the mail...

(grin)

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-09-02 01:24 PM


Irresistible invitation to share bliss, dear Helen.

Love,
M

Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-09-02 01:28 PM


Oh, I like this thought.
Huan Yi
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6 posted 2009-09-02 01:43 PM


.

Always the romantic . . .
Good Helen


John

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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2009-09-18 06:11 PM


Yes of course...James
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8 posted 2009-09-20 12:09 PM


I had to fight through the PiP men lined up and in the way (stole the hersey's kisses from Dark Stranger) - but I am here to tell you that I really like this.  And I agree with you.  You DO deserve to be kissed.

xoxoxo
Alison

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2009-09-20 01:11 AM


Hah, well yes, everybody does. That certain attention and affection towards one person.


ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2009-09-20 10:29 PM


You are a sweetheart
xoxoxox

Tomer
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11 posted 2009-09-20 11:06 PM


Nice writing, enjoyed.

Tomer

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